英文文法..好簡單

The selflessness of works who would rather cut their hours than see a friend lose their job.]<-------------A bad sentence!!

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Answer: The selfless workers would rather cut their hours than see their friends lose their jobs.
Mistakes:
1) The selflessness of workers<-------------- Funny part!
We'd just say " The selfless 無私的 ( adjective) workers( countable noun)".
The happy men<------------------------Clear and natural!
The happiness of men<----------------------Unnatural!
2) who <-------- is wrongly used here
The man WHO has just talked to you ( is my cousin). A complete sentence here
Let's look at your long sentence now.
The selflessness of works who would rather cut their hours than see a friend lose their job ( Incomplete sentence).
3) The selfless workers <--------------------> their friends
4) to lose their jobS. <---------------There is an "S".
The selfless workers ------------ their friends ---------- their jobs



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2009-02-17 03:30:17 補充：
rather than see their co-workers同事<---------think about using this word too