check grammar (one sentense)

I would choose New Items 2 because it lets people know the heavy price they pay for piracy.
the heavy price they pay for piracy== 承擔盜版這行為的嚴重後果

the heavy price of piracy = 盜版十分昂貴<-------Wrong!

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2009-02-15 16:01:42 補充：
I would choose New Items 2 because it lets people know the heavy price they pay for piracy.
the heavy price they pay for piracy== 承擔盜版這行為的嚴重後果

I think the original sentence is fine, and the grammar is correct.

Responder #001's suggestion is also good, but I think the last two words (to pay) may be redundant, i.e. it could simply be: I would choose News Item 2 because it shows that piracy comes with a heavy price.

I would choose News Item 2 because it shows people that piracy comes with a price to pay.


P.S. Your grammar seems correct indeed, just that you can put the sentence in a better way.