I have the confidence if your university can give the opportunity, let me have a deeper study, decide must the knowledge back coupling society which learns me, the promotion social development.
It would be greatly appreciated if you would consider my application for furthering my studies at your university. I can ensure you that I will contribute back to the society for its social develpment with all the knowledge I would learn from this great university.
"如果貴校能給我機會讓我有更深的學習,我有信心我能夠將我所學到的知識回饋社會, 並促進社會發展。".....?! 並促進社會發展.哈哈哈哈!!thought ur english is bad,ur chinese even worse.heehee !!..wha u try 2 say la,u gonna 2 becomes "God". and save the wold?!
If your University give me the opportunity for further studies, I have the confidence that I can earn the knowledge andthe promotion of social development.
it doesn't really make sense, if u can post wt u actually wanna say in chinese, then it'll be easier to understand wt u wanna express, and then to give better checking.