批改英文一則~~~~~

2009-02-05 1:15 pm
I have the confidence if your university can give the opportunity, let me have a deeper study, decide must the knowledge back coupling society which learns me, the promotion social development.

以有冇咩錯漏?唔該哂^_^"
更新1:

如果貴校能給我機會讓我有更深的學習,我有信心我能夠將我所學到的知識回饋社會, 並促進社會發展。

回答 (4)

2009-02-16 1:59 pm
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It would be greatly appreciated if you would consider my application for furthering my studies at your university. I can ensure you that I will contribute back to the society for its social develpment with all the knowledge I would learn from this great university.
2009-02-16 3:41 pm
"如果貴校能給我機會讓我有更深的學習,我有信心我能夠將我所學到的知識回饋社會, 並促進社會發展。".....?! 並促進社會發展.哈哈哈哈!!thought ur english is bad,ur chinese even worse.heehee !!..wha u try 2 say la,u gonna 2 becomes "God". and save the wold?!
2009-02-05 6:39 pm
If your University give me the opportunity for further studies, I have the confidence that I can earn the knowledge andthe promotion of social development.
2009-02-05 4:21 pm
it doesn't really make sense, if u can post wt u actually wanna say in chinese, then it'll be easier to understand wt u wanna express, and then to give better checking.


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