✔ 最佳答案
003翻得算不錯,但我自己主張句子可以多用主動式(active voice).被動式能突出受害者的身份,不是不用,但要是每句也用,文章和讀者之間便會有點疏離.
另外,003的absence應該是absent吧.
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人與人之間要能和諧共處,只有消除歧視才行,
The only way to dissolve discrimination is to ensure an harmonious relationship between members in a community.
校園欺凌,原因都是欺凌者歧視被欺凌者,所以加以欺凌,
Bullying prevails in schools because students who bully discriminate against some others, who then become their victims. Again, discrimination is the crux.
理論沒有了歧視,校園欺凌問題就自動解決
In other words, bullying in schools will be instantly diminished if discrimination no longer exists.
2009-02-05 01:16:53 補充:
抱歉,第1句我當初睇錯左,現在改正如下: 人與人之間要能和諧共處,只有消除歧視才行,
The only way to ensure an harmonious relationship between members in a community is to dissolve discrimination.