英文作文 my best friend 20 點急

I think your friend's name is fiona not friona also it's small mouth not month. + when she sees the teacher she will say hi---not see. she has/had--- not have. and I think I should help you fix most of your grammar. There are so many mistakes. < I did not know how many words does it had to be >

I have two best friend, she is Julia and Fiona. Let me tell you about them. Julia is very nice and polite. She is friendly. She worked really hard on most of the subjects and she usually gets good grades. She had a pair of big brown eyes and a small mouth. She is very kind because she always respect me and other of her friends.< you can talk about her hobbies, favorite color, and how did you meet her >

Another of my best friend is Fiona. < describe her personalities > Her birthday is on September 1. < read 1 as first not one > she has a small mouth and a pair of small eyes. < talk about her favorite subject, how did you and her became friends >

you know what I need more details about your friends!~