句子文法有否錯?

風景畫,通常外國人會咁表達:

My landscapes usually look like these: green valleys as the backdrop, a clear river flowing on gently, fluffy clouds hanging in the blue sky, and a rainbow shining into the valleys.

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The Lion King http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0110357/

I always love to draw my landscape painting with a series of greenmountains overlooking a river with clear water flowing gently plus a crow flying inthe blue sky and a rainbow hanging across the top of the mountains.

What's your favourite move? It has to be educational on a website that I can access to see it.

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揣照原意，重排潤釋。

1.I always draw landscape paintings with ranges of green mountains﹔a river with clear water flowing gently﹔a crow flying in the blue sky; a rainbow above the mountains .