Lunar New Year,大家幫,下手話俾我聽邊到錯啦!! Help Help!!!!
My Diary
Weather:Cold Date:28thJanuary,09
This New year, I did more things. But I think the most
memorable is spring-clean and played firework.(我玩個D煙花系手揸住個D-----滴滴金,我家姐就話你就甘寫人地點知你系話緊哩種煙花呀?除非你寫明啦咁話,但系我都可知滴滴金/手揸住個種煙花叫咩名.) 第2段↓
The firework is very beatiful.I played this in my hometown.(鄉下)
In my hometown, have a big lake(1個好大既湖). When I give out(放)the firework, the sparkler(煙火) will mirror(反射) on the lake.(有中文字個D系我想表達既意思,但吾知用得岩吾岩)
Spring-clean is also hard too! Everyone is want to come off the
bad luck so every year we will do the spring-clean . Hope this year
can be good . (大掃除系幾辛苦的!每個人都想脫離衰連所每一年
我地都會大掃除.希望哩年會好.) 我哩到系甘講,我都覺得好有問
題,但系又吾合知點作番好.
This I feel very happy because I do more meaning things.
幫幫手...吾該.. 可以幫我成篇作過架. 不過要適合番小6程度.
更新1:
由This I feel個到, 系感想,吾知點解佢會連埋.可吾可以再幫我改改?
更新2:
同埋第1段有個字系bv,系咪吾關事架?
更新3:
第1段有D吾明,咩(唔好在e度寫!>下面先寫) ?? 姐系咪the one was playing firework which holding a little strip and spring-clean running around happily.???真系吾明
更新4:
我自己已經作左篇野交俾老師喇!算啦!我都會俾你最佳回答.
