英文高手翻譯(急, 高分!!)

I have just received my IELTs result. Unfortunately, my scores for the Writing and Speaking section is only 5.5 bands, which is 0.5 band below your requirement. I would be much appreciative if you could accept my application so that I will be able to enroll with your university.


Should my request meets with your favourable consideration, I will be sure to use every endeavour to improve my English in the future.

你好, 我岩岩收到ielts成績, 但係我writing同speaking 得5.5, 同你地既要求只差0.5, 希望你可以俾我入讀
中國人有句說話, 知恥近乎勇, 以後我會更加努力去練好d英文"
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hello,sir! My precipitous receives the ielts result, but my writing with speaking just got 5.5, already requests with missing 0.5 only, hoped that you may enable I to enter read the Chinese to have a speech, knows the shame to approach bravely, later I even more diligently will practice English "

hope i can help u!!!!