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2009-01-26 2:49 am
剛收到貴校來信通知 女兒不被取錄的信件. 本人及家人的心情被嚴重打擊,本人對女兒入讀 貴校抱住很大的寄望。本人很有誠意入讀 貴校,希望 貴校能給女兒一個機會入讀貴校。本人家庭能女兒負出的時間及心機,相信女兒的資質及個人品格的不會差於其他小朋友。

以下是女兒為入學前作好的準備資料︰

1.已經在幼稚園入讀學前班
2.每日進行英語訓錬 -
3.家人努力地教育女兒良好的品格及資識
4.給女兒一個好好空間,自我探索

相信家庭及貴校 手合作,必定能提供一個良好的學習環境。希望貴校能夠 重考慮後補生位,給予女兒一個機會。本人及家人必定感激萬分。

期待收到 貴校的通知。

回答 (3)

2009-01-26 8:06 am
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I had just received a rejection letter from your institution stating that my daughter would not be accepted. The mood of my family and myself had been ruined seriously. I placed a good portion of expectations and sincerity in regards to my daughter’s admission to your school. Please give my daughter a chance to study in your school. We have devoted our full efforts to bring up our daughter, and we truly believe that our daughter’s potential and personality would be as good as the other children.

The following are the information prepared by my daughter:
1.Attended a pre-school before entering kindergarten.
2.Practice English on a daily basis.
3.Family members worked hard on developing our daughter’s personality and knowledge.
4.Give our daughter a space for self-exploration.

I believe that a good learning environment will be formed if our family and your school cooperate together. We shall be grateful that your school will reconsider her opportunity of admission to your school and give her a replacement status.

Looking forward to your prompt reply. Thanks for your attention in this matter.
2009-01-26 9:13 am
Just received a letter from your school to inform her daughter not to be admitted to the letter. His and his family's mood was a serious blow, I enrolled in school for her daughter clinging to a lot of hope. I enrolled in school in good faith, I hope your school can give her daughter an opportunity to enroll in school. My family can bear a daughter of the time and efforts, I believe her daughter's qualifications and personal character will not be worse than other children.

Following is a good daughter to school before preparing information ︰

1. Have been enrolled in pre-kindergarten
2. Daily English language training --
3. Families efforts to education of good character and his daughter-funded knowledge
4. To the daughter of a good space, self-exploration

Believe that the family and your school work hand in hand, I think we will provide a good learning environment. I hope your school can re-consider after the meeting of Health, and give her daughter a chance. His and his family would be most grateful.

Look forward to receiving your school notice
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2009-01-26 7:25 am
剛收到貴校來信通知 女兒不被取錄的信件. 本人及家人的心情被嚴重打擊,本人對女兒入讀 貴校抱住很大的寄望。本人很有誠意入讀 貴校,希望 貴校能給女兒一個機會入讀貴校。本人家庭能女兒負出的時間及心機,相信女兒的資質及個人品格的不會差於其他小朋友。
Just received your school daughter letter to the letter Admission. His and his family be attacked relentlessly the mood, I read your school daughter to hold great hopes in him. I am very sincere reading into your school, I hope your daughter school to an opportunity to read your school. I families can be the daughter of the time and effort, I believe daughter quality and personal qualities will not be worse than the other children.

以下是女兒為入學前作好的準備資料︰
The following is a daughter for make before enter school good of prepare the data:

1.已經在幼稚園入讀學前班
1.already before the kindergarten go into read to learn class

2.每日進行英語訓錬 -
2. Daily English language training

3.家人努力地教育女兒良好的品格及資識
3 family efforts to education daughter good character and knowledge

4.給女兒一個好好空間,自我探索
4.give my daughter a good space, self-exploration

相信家庭及貴校 手合作,必定能提供一個良好的學習環境。希望貴校能夠 重考慮後補生位,給予女兒一個機會。本人及家人必定感激萬分。
the ego quest believes the family and the hand cooperation in the expensive school, necessarily can provide a good learning environment.Hope the expensive school can repair to get after the heavy consideration, giving the daughter a chance.Oneself and the family are necessarily deeply grateful.

期待收到 貴校的通知。
Looks forward to receiving the notice your school.
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