how to write business personal

I am currently working on my AA degree. Once I have received my AA degree, I plan to transfer immediately to a four year college to earn a bachelor's degree in finance. I have already done research on finance as a major to make certain that I have the taken both the required and the recommended classes as a part of my AA degree program.

I learned that the School of Business at the college I want to attend is currently impacted. The term 'impacted' basically means that School of Business has more students than they have classrooms and teachers. As a result, priority is given to students who are seniors and need to complete certain classes to graduate. According to the college counseling office, this makes it difficult to get classes in my major. If the problem worsens before I am admitted to that college, I might have start taking classes as a student with an undeclared major and then apply for admission to the business school at the end of the first semester. The counselor told me that the good news is that the Business School is working as quickly as it can to increase the number of classes it offers. The counselor said that hopefully by the time I am ready to attend the program will no longer be impacted.

One of the reasons I chose finance as a major is that I have an affinity for mathematics. I think this will help me to understand the concepts of business finance, in the same way this ability helped me to excel in the accounting process.

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First of all, all personal info must be included with correct grammar. Simple Eng is good Eng but don't use the same pattern through out which is really boring.

Also, state as much about your strength, prizes you got ... etc. In addition why you are suitable to study the course.