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2009-01-24 7:47 pm

Annie studies inXXX Proke kai Primary shool in primary 6.One day, she did not come to school and her teacher .Ms Tam told the class about Annie's family situation.Annie's monther was sick and has not being
able to work as she has to go to the hospital ferquently for treatments.
Her father has also lost his job because of the economic crisis.The students in the class then realised why Annie'suniforms are often old and small,her schoolbag has a hole and she sometimes does not even have pen.They feel sorry for her and want to do something for her.

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wong

2009-01-24 10:38 pm

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There are some grammar mistakes. It is corrected below:

Annie studies in XXX Proke Kai Primary School. She is primary 6 this year. One day, she did not come to school. So her class teacher Mrs Tam told the class about Annies's family situation: Annie's mother was sick and needed to go to the hopital frequently for treatments. Due to that she could not go to work. Her father lost his jop because of the economic crisis.
Annie's classmates Then realised why Annie's uniforms were old and looked like rags. Here school bag had holes in it too. They all wanted to help Annie.

Long version(I thought it up myself)

Some of her classmates started some charity work. They donated clothes to Annie and visited her. Annie was pleased with them. She was happy that you could have such good friends

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