一D作文文法上既文題,好似有錯字,篇野係1個小4程度

2009-01-24 12:08 am
Miss Jenny was born in China. She is a Canadian overseas Chinese. She graduated from the University of Macau three years ago. She choose to work in Louhau because she thinks that the Louhau's students are beautiful, nice, kind and politely. She is an English teacher. She wants to be a teacher because she likes to share the knowledge which she knows with her students.

On the other hand, she thinks that it is difficult to be a teacher because it is hard to make students interested in class. She thinks English is very important because it can be used to comminute with the foreign people and we can understand and know more information and culture about the other countries, and we can also make friends with foreigners. Because of that, she has opened a class teaching phonetic symbols to improve students'English.

She thinks the students in our school are nice and politely. She wants to be a teacher forever.
更新1:

係有錯字+

更新2:

話過我知邊個字

回答 (3)

2009-01-24 2:19 am
✔ 最佳答案
"She choose to work in Louhau because she thinks that the Louhau's students are beautiful, nice, kind and politely." - change to "chose" and "polite"

"She thinks English is very important because it can be used to comminute with the foreign people and we can understand and know more information and culture about the other countries."
- the foreign people (delete "the")
- the other countries (delete "the")
2009-01-26 2:38 am
In line 8, it can be used to comminute with the foreign people

It should be 'communicate' but not 'comminute'.
Also, I think you should use 'polite' instead of 'politely' as we need to use adj. but not adv.
參考: myself
2009-01-24 12:15 am
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