(發以下問題只係想攪清楚對英文文法既困擾)
各位專家...又係2個動詞既問題...
以下轉貼至一個論壇幫人改左的文...並話應該有會考level 4
但發現佢用逗號分開2句...就再用動詞...
請問好似佢咁用逗號分開2個句子就再用動詞得唔得架呢?
如果唔得...
請各位高人幫我整一整理呢篇文....
改返岩佢....如可用有色字顯示更佳....
Now,you are provided with two kinds of job. The first one will bring you high salaries, yet, the other one is the job you are interested in. Which one would you choose? Actually,we have to work for money and spend it. Also, there are different kinds of job that we can choose such as cleaner, cook and researcher. If I can choose two jobs, one with high salaries while the other one is my interesting job, I will choose the latter one. I believe you will ask me, “The high salary job could bring you more money, why did you choose the other one?” I do think your mind is bended.
Firstly, many people think that if I choose the high salary job, I can buy more things I need and have enough money to travel the world. When I was young, I also get this point of view. But now, I think the interesting job is the better one. Although the high salary job can earn more money than the interesting job, I won't choose it. The main reason is it will affect my working behaviors and increase my pressure.I cannot work hard for it. Seriously, it will lead to the serious consequences such as the relationship with my family and the thinking of suicide.
Secondly, if I choose the interesting job, it will raise my confidenceon the work and I will do it for the best. Working happily can avoid the diseases.You will find it is a fun work. On the other hand, if I choose the high salary job, do you suppose I can find any fun in it? Will I find more happiness and enjoyable? Let me tell you, I can't find any joy on it, definitely!
In conclusion, I think the interesting job is the better one, if you don't like the present job, you won't work hard. It will bring many problems to your life, so I believe my choice is right.
又係2個英文動詞既問題....(15分)
2009-01-22 11:42 am
回答 (4)
2009-01-24 3:38 am
✔ 最佳答案
sorry to say... 篇文改得好差!I suggest you to rewrite it.
Below is the revision for your reference:
If there are two jobs for you, would you choose the one with higher salary or the one that you are interested?
Certainly, everyone knows that money is a necessary for living. But for me, I would like to choose the one I am interested in over the one with higher salary. Of course, some people may doubt about my choice and questioning the reason behind. Also, some people may even believe that money can help with achieving a lot of desires like: shopping, traveling, etc. However, for my point of view, an interesting job can leverage my job gratification (satisfaction) and thus to make my living happier. In fact, those uninterested jobs shall lower (diminish) my job performance and increase my pressure. Eventually, it may lead to some serious consequences such as bring myself into depression, influence the overall living condition as well as affect the relationship with my family.
Moreover, the selection of interesting job will boost up my self-confidence at work and leading me to better performance. In fact, a happy life shall result in better health; and I am pretty sure everyone shall agree on this!
2009-02-11 5:12 am
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2009-01-23 2:53 pm
i have no clue what u are talking about...?!
2009-01-22 3:55 pm
Now,you are provided with two kinds of job. The first one will bring you high salaries, yet, the other one is the job you are interested in. Which one would you choose? Actually,we have to work for money and spend it. Also, there are different kinds of job that we can choose such as cleaner, cook and researcher. If I can choose two jobs, one with high salaries while the other one is my interesting job, I will choose the latter one. I believe you will ask me, “The high salary job could bring you more money, why did you choose the other one?” I do think your mind is bended.
Firstly, many people think that if I choose the high salary job, I can buy more things I need and have enough money to travel the world. When I was young, I also get this point of view. But now, I think the interesting job is the better one. Although the high salary job can earn more money than the interesting job, I won't choose it. The main reason is it will affect my working behaviors and increase my pressure.I cannot work hard for it. Seriously, it will lead to the serious consequences such as the relationship with my family and the thinking of suicide.
Secondly, if I choose the interesting job, it will raise my confidenceon the work and I will do it for the best. Working happily can avoid the diseases.You will find it is a fun work. On the other hand, if I choose the high salary job, do you suppose I can find any fun in it? Will I find more happiness and enjoyable? Let me tell you, I can't find any joy on it, definitely!
In conclusion, I think the interesting job is the better one, if you don't like the present job, you won't work hard. It will bring many problems to your life, so I believe my choice is right.
Firstly, many people think that if I choose the high salary job, I can buy more things I need and have enough money to travel the world. When I was young, I also get this point of view. But now, I think the interesting job is the better one. Although the high salary job can earn more money than the interesting job, I won't choose it. The main reason is it will affect my working behaviors and increase my pressure.I cannot work hard for it. Seriously, it will lead to the serious consequences such as the relationship with my family and the thinking of suicide.
Secondly, if I choose the interesting job, it will raise my confidenceon the work and I will do it for the best. Working happily can avoid the diseases.You will find it is a fun work. On the other hand, if I choose the high salary job, do you suppose I can find any fun in it? Will I find more happiness and enjoyable? Let me tell you, I can't find any joy on it, definitely!
In conclusion, I think the interesting job is the better one, if you don't like the present job, you won't work hard. It will bring many problems to your life, so I believe my choice is right.
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