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Hi, Glnat. I am a student of XXX. I recently got an article needed to be revised. Are you available at 2:30~5:00 PM this Fri afternoon?
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Hi~Glnat I am xxx's student. Recently I got a article that needs you to revise it for me, so I was wondering if this Friday afternoon from 2:30 to 5:00 is okay for you?

Hi~Glnat, I'm xxx's student, i was wondering if you have time this Friday from 2:30pm to 5:00pm i have an article that needs to be revised, can you help me with it?

Hi ~ Glnat I xxx students, has recently been an article need to amend your help, I do not know
Road this Friday afternoon 2:30 pm to 5:00 pm availability?

Hi~Glnat! I am xxx's student. Recently, there is an article that needs you to revise. Do you have time on Friday 2:30 to 5:00?

Hi~Glnat I am xxx student, recently some article needed you to help to revise, did not know that this Friday's afternoon 2:30 to 5:00 whether to have free time?