my chrismas holiday 翻譯~~~急~~~

My Christmas Holiday
I went to Causeway Bay in thmy christmas holiday, I go there and eat the christmas dinner with my family. There are a lot of food in the christmas dinner, such as Salmon, Eight fingernail fish, the turkey, the shrimp, the crab, the sail , potato , blue melon and so on, also the very delicious, we are very happy. After eating the Christmas dinner, we went shopping , we have gone to sogo and shopping centre, I have bought T-shirt, a coat and jeans. Then, we went home . Today is a wonderful day.

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My Christmas holiday
During the Christmas holiday,i went to Causeway Bay.I went there to have Christmas dinner with my family,there was much food such as Salmon, Eight fingernail fish, turkeys, shrimps, crabs, sails , potatoes , blue melons ,etc,they were all tasty and we are pleased.After dinner,we did some shopping,we went to the one of the shopping malls such as Sogo,i have bought a T-shirt,a jacket and a pair of jeans.After that,we went home.
I thought it is wonderful today.









Correct tenses and correct forms such as have dinner not eat dinner(it is not english)

2009-01-20 17:50:28 補充：
點解佢係最佳回答?
eat dinner?都唔係英文,仲有jeans要有量詞(即係a pair of jeans),
仲有the crab,the sail ,同埋原來聖誕大餐得一隻蟹,一件薯仔?
shopping centre 冇加s都算,T-shirt一係就加a,一係就加s,兩樣都冇即係咩?
go there唔使past tense呀?
'also the very delicious'都唔知係咩,當你打錯the,應係they ,唔洗are?
抄佢都錯到七彩啦!!!

My Christmas day vacation I have gone to Causeway Bay in the Christmas day vacation, I and my big family has the Christmas western-style food in Causeway Bay, the Christmas western-style food has many foods, for example: The salmon, eight fingernail fish, the turkey, the shrimp, the crab, the sail set up shell, potato young, blue melon and so on, also the very good tastes, we are very completely happy. After eating the Christmas western-style food, we went to window-shop, we have gone to sogo and so on market shopping, I have bought T-shirt, a coat and jeans. Then, we then went home. Today is wonderful one day.

My Christmas Holiday

I went to Causeway Bay in thmy christmas holiday, I go there and eat the christmas dinner with my family. There are a lot of food in the christmas dinner, such as Salmon, Eight fingernail fish, the turkey, the shrimp, the crab, the sail , potato , blue melon and so on, also the very delicious, we are very happy. After eating the Christmas dinner, we went shopping , we have gone to sogo and shopping centre, I have bought T-shirt, a coat and jeans. Then, we went home . Today is a wonderful day.