請英文好的朋友幫幫忙.好重要ga

2009-01-18 4:08 am
2003 11月21日夜晚11時, 當我的母親和妹妹緊抱在一起痛哭的時候,在我的內心充斥著一份悔意,在那一刻我永世不能忘記,我不能為自己找任何藉口,我徹底的錯了.

在八月的時候, 當我在玩耍的心態下贏取了第一筆足球投注的金額後,在我內心那份驕傲自大感慢慢上升起來,在我之然,只要用腦思考思考,不難賺取可觀之財. 當我贏取的次數越來越多的時候,慢慢投注金額也漸漸提升,在那時,內心只有賭博.其他甚麼也不想去想.至直最後, 當我輸掉所有金錢後,我還偷了我母親的錢去賭,當我的母親和我的妹妹發現後,他們哭了足足一整夜,最後還要去看醫生.最後當我的母親從醫院走出來看見我後,抱著我對我說. “每個人都會有迷失方向的時候, 就算你怎樣做錯,你都是我的親兒子” 在那時, 我的腿根本站不穩, 就在那時, 我在我的母親面前跪下了,哭著說不出話來.

回想那時, 如果不是家人的支持和教導, 我相信我很難支撐下去, 在我內心而然, 那種悔意是不能用言語來形容的. 是他們給我希望, 現在我不怕對人說這件事, 因為我知道在這個世界上有包容, 經過這次難忘經歷, 除了令我個人思想成熟了之外, 亦令我學會了做人應該搭搭實實,一步一步來, 在那時我便將更多時間放在學習上了.



請英文好的朋友幫幫手,很重要的,不是拿來交功課,是用在有意義的事上的,所以請盡量幫幫忙,希望請不要翻釋有錯,因為是拿來警惕別人的.謝謝各位.

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2009-01-22 5:44 am
2003 November 21 night 11 o'clock, when my mother and sister wept when hug together, in my heart filled with a remorse, in that moment forever I can not forget, I can not find any excuse for their own, I completely wrong.


In August, when I play under the mentality to win the first football betting amount, in my heart that arrogant sense of slowly rising up, in my course, as long as the brain thinking with thinking, not difficult to make a handsome fortune. When I win the number of more and more time, slowly and gradually upgrade the amount of bets, at that time, only feel gambling. What other not want to think. to the final straight, when I lose After all the money out, I also stole my mother's money to gamble on them, when my mother and my sister found, they cried for a whole night, and finally also to see a doctor. Finally, when my mother from the hospital going to see me after I had said to me. "Everyone will have time to lose our direction, even if you are going to do the wrong thing, you are my pro-son" at that time, my site leg instability, on the At that time, I kneel down in front of my mother, and tears speak.


I recalled that when, if not the support of his family and to teach, I believe that it is difficult for me to support it, in my heart and ran, the kind of remorse are not words to describe the. Is that they give me hope, and now I am not afraid of people say this matter, because I know in this world there is tolerance, a result of this unforgettable experience, in addition to my personal thinking is mature beyond, but also I learned how to ride a man should really take it step by step, in the time I put more time on learning on.
2009-01-20 3:57 am
2003 in November 21 11:00p.m., when my mother and the younger sister hugs tightly weeps bitterly in the same place, is flooding regret in mine innermost feelings, always cannot forget in that moment me, I can't look for any pretext for myself, I thorough was wrong.^.^

In August's time, when I after playing under the point of view won the amount which the first soccer concentrates, feels self-important the feeling in my innermost feelings that share to rise slowly, in me however, so long as pondered with the brain, is not difficult to earn the considerable wealth. When I win the number of times are getting more and more, slowly the concentration amount also gradually promotes, at that time, the innermost feelings only then gambled. Other what doesn't want to go to think. To straight finally, when after I lose all moneys, I also stole my mother's money to bet, when after my mother and my younger sister discovered that they cried enough one all night, also to go finally to go see a doctor. Finally when my mother walks after the hospital sees me, hugs me to me to say. “each people will have will lose the direction time, even if you how do wrong, you were my own son” at that time, my leg could not come to stop, at that time, I had knelt down in front of my mother, cried not to be able to speak.

Recollection at that time, if is not family member's support and the guidance, I believed that I very difficult to support, in my innermost feelings, but however, that kind of regret cannot use the spoken language to describe. Is they hoped for me that now I did not fear said this matter to the human, because I knew that has containing in this world, undergoes this unforgettable experience, besides made my thought mature, also made me to learn to be the human to build truly, comes gradually, then more time will a place at that time in the study in me.

希望可以幫到你!
參考: 自已
2009-01-18 10:56 pm
有無想過幫自己找一位好的外籍老師學好英文的發音, 拼音, 文法和聽講?? 我的先生是位英國人, 現職是一位英文補習老師, 擁有國際認可的TEFL/TESL英語教學文憑及多年教學經驗,可於任何時間上門替各學生或成人補習英文. 收費合理, 如有興趣可與本人聯絡:

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2009-01-18 12:19 pm
On November 21st, 2003, 11 o' clock pm., my mother and my sister were hugging and weeping. At that time, I was filled with regrets, and I will never forget that moment. I cannot find an excuse for myself, I have completely done wrong. In August, when I was playing around, winning my first prize in betting, I gained some arrogance and it built up. As I kept winning, I kept betting more and more. All I thought about then was to bet, and nothing else. At the end, I lost all my money, and stole my mother's money to bet. Once my mother and my sister found out, they cried for a whole night, and had to see a doctor afterwards. Later, when my mother came out from the hospital and saw me, she hugged me and said,"everyone has a time where they lose their sense of direction. No matter what you do wrong, you are still my son." At that time, I couldn't stand up anymore, I knelt down in front of my mother and started crying, not saying a word. Thinking back to that time, if it wasn't my family's support and teaching, I believe that I wouldn't be able to live on. In my heart still, that feeling of regret cannot be described. They gave me hope, and now I am not afraid to tell other people this story, because I know that there is such thing as forgiving on this world. AFter this unforgettable experience, not only did it help me to be more mature, it also taught me that we should be taking one step at a time, taking everything slowly. After that, I spent more time focusing on studying.
2009-01-18 4:23 am
2003 on November 21 night 11:00, when my mother and the younger sister hugs tightly weeps bitterly in the same place, is flooding regret in mine innermost feelings, always cannot forget in that moment me, I cannot look for any pretext for myself, I thorough was wrong.

In August time, when I after playing under the point of view won the amount which the first soccer concentrates, feels self-important the feeling in my innermost feelings that share to rise slowly, in me however, so long as pondered with the brain, is not difficult to earn the considerable wealth. When I win the number of times are getting more and more, slowly the concentration amount also gradually promotes, at that time, the innermost feelings only then gambled. Other what doesn't want to go to think. To straight finally, when after I lose all moneys, I also stole my mother's money to bet, when after my mother and my younger sister discovered that they cried enough one all night, finally also to go to go see a doctor. Finally when my mother walks after the hospital sees me, hugs me to me to say. “each people will have will lose the direction time, even if you how make the mistake, you were my own son” at that time, my leg could not come to a stop, at that time, I had knelt down in front of my mother, cried not to be able to speak.

Recollection at that time, if is not family member's support and the guidance, I believed that I very difficult to support, in my innermost feelings, but however, that kind of regret cannot use the spoken language to describe. Is they hoped for me that now I did not fear said this matter to the human, because I knew that has containing in this world, undergoes this unforgettable experience, besides made my thought mature, also made me to learn the personhood to build truly, comes gradually, then more time will place at that time in the study in me.
參考: Dictionary
2009-01-18 4:21 am
In 11 o'clock night on 21 November 2003 , when my mother and sister wept when hug together, in my heart filled with a remorse, in that moment I can not forget forever , I can not find any excuse for their own, I completely wrong.


In August, when I play under the mentality to win the first football betting amount, in my heart that arrogant sense of slowly rising up, in my course, as long as the brain thinking with thinking, not difficult to make a handsome fortune. When I win the number of more and more time, slowly and gradually upgrade the amount of bets, at that time, only feel gambling. What other not want to think. To the final straight, when I lost all the money, I also stole my mother's money to gamble on them, when my mother and my sister noticed, they cried for a whole night, and finally also to see a doctor. Finally, when my mother from the hospital to see me out after I had said to me. "Everyone will have time to lose our direction, even if you are going to do the wrong thing, you are my pro-son" at that time, my basically waddled feet on at that time, I kneel down in front of my mother, and tears speak.


WhenI recalled that, if not the support of his family and to teach, I believe that it is difficult for me to support it, in my heart and ran, the kind of remorse are not words to describe the. Is that they give me hope, and now I am not afraid of people say this matter, because I know in this world there is tolerance, a result of this unforgettable experience, in addition to my personal thinking is mature beyond, but also I learned how to ride a man should really take it step by step, in the time I put more time on learning on.


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