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Dear Miss Lam

My daughter Amy Chui (1G) does not have time to practice orchestra on Wednesday. It is because she has Maths lesson and volin lesson on every Wednesday.
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Dear Miss Lam,
I am writing to inform you that my daughter Amy Chiu (1G) will not be able to take part in the rehearsals of the orchestra on Wednesdays. It is because she needs to attend maths and violin classes every Wednesday.
Thank you very much for your kind attention.
Yours sincerely,
Parents of Amy Chiu,
XXXXXX<-------------Sign here
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every Wednesday <---------- no " on"
violin <----------------------v i o l i n
to attend XXXXX classes
= rehearsal(s) = noun = 排練
to rehearse( verb)
on WednesdayS<-----------WednesdayS------ to show all WednesdayS
not the specific one
to take part in = to participate in =

2009-01-13 22:34:26 補充：
maths/math/mathematics "m"

Dear Miss Lam,

Please be informed that my daughter Amy Chui (1G) will not be able to practice Orchestra on Wednesday as she has to attend Maths and Violin lesson on every Wednesday as well.

Thank you for your attention.


Yours sincerely,



Parent of Amy Chui (1G)

Dear Miss Lam,

My daughter Amy Chui (1G) will not be able to join the orchestra
practice on Wednesday. The reason is, she has Maths tutoring and
violin [唔好漏左個i呀><"] lesson every Wednesday after school.

Thankyou for your understanding.

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