仲有希望把我文章的意思要像中文一樣
特別是在第二段和第三段~~
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Today, we will introduce how computers impact our society. Firstly, I will talk about the physical properties of computers and computer who is the inventor of computer. Computer was invented by Ector and Lane. Nowadays, a computer includes a tower, which looks like a box, and a screen, which looks like a thin book. We even have laptops (or notebook computers). However, ten years ago, computers are much larger.
Computers have impact on society. First of all, computers help me to handle things easily. For example, we can use computers to handle or compute data much faster than our human brain. Computers can also entertain us. When we play on the computer or listen to music, we feel fun and relaxed. Finally, computers can improve our communication. For example, we can use MSN to meet new friends, and can take a meeting through the computer. But computer also have bad side. If we use computer too much. We will waste our time and effect our study.
Aggregate, we should make good of computer, computer can very useful in our society,
更新1:
今天,我們會介紹電腦如何影響我們的社會. 首先,我一些關於電腦的外形和誰人發明電.電腦是被Ector and Lane發明的. 現在, 一部電腦包恬主機,它像一個箱,和顥不器,它像一本瘦的書. 我們甚至有手提電腦. 但是,10年前,電腦是非常巨大的. 電腦會影響在社會.第一,電腦處理快些比我們人腦. 電腦也能娛樂我們. 當我們玩電腦遊戲或听音樂,我們會感到有趣和輕鬆.電腦會改善我們的溝通.例如,我用MSN去認識新朋友,和能開會議通过電腦.但係電腦也有壞的方面.如果我們用電腦用得太多,會浪費我們的時間和影響我們的學習. 總結,我們應該善用電腦, 那麼,電腦一定能夠在我們的塺會非常有用
