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According to Canadian English:

Day 2 Morning :
We will HAVE breakfast AT THE hotel. After breakfast, we WILL take a bus to visit Ocean Park and discover the jam-packed excitement of one of Southeast Asia’s largest aquariums and theme parks. You WILL BE ABLE TO SEE the pandas in there, they ARE callED An An, Jia Jia, Ying Ying and Le Le. From handicrafts to plush toys, t-shirts and Hats, there'S something AVAILABLE for everyone on the list.

Afternoon :
We WILL TAKE A TEN MINUTE walk to The Bayview Restaurant of Ocean Park for lunch, we WILL eat steak sandwich, Chicken rice, Season pasta AND etc.
After the lunch, we WILL VISIT THE Marine Land Show of Ocean Park, it is the home of CaliforniaN sea lions and seals. THE trainers will talk about their habitats during THEIR MEALS. And other popular ATTRACTIONS ARE the Sea Jelly Spectacular, Abyss Turbo Drop, the Mine Train, the Flying Swing and the Film Fantasia Simulator Ride.

Evening :
We WILL take a taxi to Aberdeen Pier and walk to THE dock for A free boat ride to THE floating restaurant, WHICH IS designed like a classic Chinese palace, and can accommodate up to 2,300 people. We can see the SPECTACULAR brightly decorated Jumbo and enjoy OUR DINNER.

day 2 Morning :
We will (have) breakfast in hotel. After (breakfast), we (will) take a bus to visit Ocean Park and discover the jam-packed excitement of one of (the) Southeast Asia’s largest aquariums and theme parks. You (will) see (pandas) (there), they (are called) An An, Jia Jia, Ying Ying and Le Le. From handicrafts to plush toys, t-shirts and ats, there’s something for everyone on the list.

Afternoon :
We (will go) to The Bayview Restaurant of Ocean Park (in) 10 minutes for lunch, we (will) (have) steak sandwich, Chicken rice and Season pasta etc.
After (lunch), we (will) see Marine Land Show of Ocean Park, it is the home of California sea lions and seals. Trainers will talk about their habitats (while) feeding. And other popular additions have been the Sea Jelly Spectacular, Abyss Turbo Drop, the Mine Train, the Flying Swing and the Film Fantasia Simulator Ride.

Evening :
We (will) take a taxi to Aberdeen Pier and (go) to dock (on foot) for free boat ride to floating restaurant, (it's) designed (as) a classic Chinese palace, and can accommodate up to 2,300 people. We (will) see the brightly decorated Jumbo and enjoy the dinner at night.