英文高手請幫幫忙~關於申請研究所的中翻英句子

I studied A as my postgraduate subject.
However, I plan to continue my learning by studying B.
I am very interested in the well-designed course of B in your school.
As a result, I intend to apply for a place in you prestigious school.

我在原來研究所攻讀A專業~但是想繼續在B專業上繼續學習(研究),而貴校的課程相當吸引我,所以想申請貴校的研究所.

I was originally studying A in my graduate program but now like to continue to study B. And now I find your graduate program to be attractive. So I’d like to apply to your school.

我朋友有在幫人翻譯,
你可以去看看:

http://tw.myblog.yahoo.com/jw!w6gPRaOCFQVCeNg8iHiYXJOJIRSG2Lw-/archive?l=f&id=5

不要逐句翻譯比較美
把妳的主動意識擺在前面表示決心


I consider my applying for admission a privilege for it can fulfill my dream to pursue a different profession with the necessary framework your school defines for an intense yet engaging advancement of transdisciplinary research which provides multiplicity and consistency, singularity and diversity.