自我介紹
我名叫呂樂軒，今年11歲，就讀慈雲山聖文德天主教小學。
我最愛演話劇，我在這2年參加了在學校演出的「英語小莎翁」的《Taming of The Shrew》和「中英劇團」的《The Three Question》和《Money and Fortune》英語話劇，曾經代表學校參加了全港性的「英語小莎翁」演出《Taming of The Shrew》。除此之外，我還參加了銀樂隊和「公益少年團」。
在這麼多的科目中，我最喜愛的是英文科，因為一個英文字可以有很多的解釋，真是非常有趣呢！而且它還是國際通用的語言，方便和世界各地的人溝通。
在6年的小學生涯中，我認識了很多好朋友和很多關心我的老師。朋友令我開心、快樂；老師令我認識很多東西。
我實在捨不得離開這個大家庭，雖然我在這小學有很多美好的回憶，不過我都很期待著中學的生活，我知道中學的生活一定比小學的生活更多姿、更多彩。
Introduces oneself
I am Kevin Lui, I am 11 years old, I am studying in T. W. S. St. Bonaventure Catholic Primary School.
I like modern drama most, I participated in “Shakespeare4All”and performed "Taming of The Shrew". I also joined“Chungying Theatre Company” and performed "The Three Question" and "Money and Fortune" . In addition, I also participated in the silver orchestra and “CYC”.
I like English most, because English is really interesting! Moreover it is an international language. Learning it well can facilitate me to communicate with others.
In 6 year elementary (primary) school profession, I had known many good friends and my teachers take care of me. Friends make me happy and joyful; Teacher taught me a lot.
I do leave this big family, although I have the happy memory in the primary school. I am looking forward to the secondary school's life, I am sure that secondary school's life will be great too.
睇吓段文有冇問題!唔該哂
2009-01-08 10:42 pm
回答 (3)
2009-01-09 1:44 am
✔ 最佳答案
是自己學校畢業禮嗎？自我介紹嗎？＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝＝我名叫呂樂軒，今年11歲， 在6年的小學生涯中，我認識了很多好朋友和很多關心我們的老師。 十分感激校長老師多年來栽培教育，其實在學科中，我最喜愛的是英文科，因為一個英文字可以有很多的解釋，真是非常有趣呢！而且它還是國際通用的語言，方便和世界各地的人溝通。
而且我愛更愛演話劇，係近年來學校比機會我參加了在學校演出的「英語小莎翁」的《Taming of The Shrew》，和「中英劇團」的《The Three Question》和《Money and Fortune》英語話劇，同時我好幸運曾經代表學校參加了全港性的「英語小莎翁」演出《Taming of The Shrew》。除此之外，我更開心參加了銀樂隊和「公益少年團」
。
時間過得好快，我實在捨不得離開這個大家庭，雖然我在這小學有很多美好的回憶，不過我都很期待著中學的生活，我知道中學的生活一定比小學的生活更 需努力奮鬥，特別係呢度多謝感激校長老師比我哋知識和栽培！最後祝校長老師身體健康！心想事成！菊弓
1服裝整齊？挺胸申直腰出場！保持笑容？聲音分高低響亮－不必急，要.引人入耳喜聽你發言演出－自我介紹？
英文作文你自己譯音吧
2009-01-08 17:47:07 補充：
特別係呢度＝＝我再多謝感激＝校長老師比我哋知識和栽培
2009-01-08 17:51:08 補充：
最後祝校長老師身體健康！心想事成！祝各位同學前途錦秀 ＝見禮菊弓
2009-01-09 1:33 am
如是中英對照,
比小學的生活更多姿、更多彩 should be .....greater and not great too
I like English most, because English is really interesting
-----> I like Enlgish most because it is 用it 就OK ( 無需在一句用English 两次)。
2009-01-08 17:34:08 補充：
末段的tense 比較亂，有時用past perfect, 有時用present, 有時用past .建議用have known, has taught or teaches.......
I need to leave.... family with a lot of happy memories remained(你這句又是 中英不對照, 在捨不得離開not match with I do leave this big family)
2009-01-08 17:35:52 補充：
雖然我在這小學有很多美好的回憶，無奈地......
2009-01-08 17:38:17 補充：
self Introduction
2009-01-08 17:40:23 補充：
to communicate with others, especially the foreigners.
比小學的生活更多姿、更多彩 should be .....greater and not great too
I like English most, because English is really interesting
-----> I like Enlgish most because it is 用it 就OK ( 無需在一句用English 两次)。
2009-01-08 17:34:08 補充：
末段的tense 比較亂，有時用past perfect, 有時用present, 有時用past .建議用have known, has taught or teaches.......
I need to leave.... family with a lot of happy memories remained(你這句又是 中英不對照, 在捨不得離開not match with I do leave this big family)
2009-01-08 17:35:52 補充：
雖然我在這小學有很多美好的回憶，無奈地......
2009-01-08 17:38:17 補充：
self Introduction
2009-01-08 17:40:23 補充：
to communicate with others, especially the foreigners.
2009-01-09 1:07 am
My Name is Kevin Lui, I am 11 years old, I am studying in T. W. S. St. Bonaventure Catholic Primary School.
My favorite interest is modern drama, I participated in “Shakespeare4All”and performed "Taming of The Shrew". I also joined“Chungying Theatre Company” and performed "The Three Question" and "Money and Fortune" . In addition, I also participated in the silver orchestra and “CYC”.
The most subject I like is English, because English have different meaning for the same word, it is really amazing. Moreover it is an international language to communicate with different race of people
For the past 6 years I spent in the primary school, I had known a lot of good friends and teachers which care me very much. Friends make me happy and joyful; Teacher taught me a lot.
I do leave this big family but I don't want to, although I have the happiness memory in there. But I am well equip & looking forward to secondary school's life, I am sure that I will have great life in the future.
My favorite interest is modern drama, I participated in “Shakespeare4All”and performed "Taming of The Shrew". I also joined“Chungying Theatre Company” and performed "The Three Question" and "Money and Fortune" . In addition, I also participated in the silver orchestra and “CYC”.
The most subject I like is English, because English have different meaning for the same word, it is really amazing. Moreover it is an international language to communicate with different race of people
For the past 6 years I spent in the primary school, I had known a lot of good friends and teachers which care me very much. Friends make me happy and joyful; Teacher taught me a lot.
I do leave this big family but I don't want to, although I have the happiness memory in there. But I am well equip & looking forward to secondary school's life, I am sure that I will have great life in the future.
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