超急~~~急過忍尿(英文作文)

我可以比d 作e篇文的guideline你。

第一段: 整d引言 , 順便講你想講果位名星係邊個
第二段: 記述那位明星的性格, 長處/短處
第三段: 記述你鍾意佢既原因
第四段: 總結+結尾

2009-01-08 17:48:11 補充：
引言: 簡簡單單, 帶到入去你想講既野就得
e.g. Everyone has a idol(偶像).

喜歡他很高
I like him because he is tall.

唔明再問

Ronan Keating is my favorite singer. He is from Dublin, Ireland. His songs are full of passion, and his singing is gorgeous. I like him because he sings well and he is handsome. The shortcoming of his singing is sometimes he loses his tone when it's high-pitched. I particularly like some of his works, e.g. All Over Again, Just When I'd given up dreaming. In sum, I enjoy listening to his songs very much.

咁你將回頭果份PSOT 出黎幫你改啦......

人地(001意見)叫你 自己 do homework.

吾明??

2009-01-08 15:19:54 補充：
做左三次三次都但回頭今次最後喔

2009-01-08 17:13:14 補充：
屎爆,開頭都吾知點教教點開頭

2009-01-08 17:34:25 補充：
引言??咁寫咩例如(搖名)

2009-01-08 17:36:56 補充：
喜歡他因為很高英文點寫