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It was so cold today.I wore lots of clothes.I just like a ball.So I walkedvery slow.When I went to outside , everyone just like me.Lots of ball on the street,haha!It was funny! Not everything was cold.The sunshine was so warm,It made me felt very comfortable.When I went to home and saw my parents ,I think my happy family is the sunshine in my life.And I love this sunshine very much.Can I be the sunshine for them?I hope I can.