英文作文幫改,(150字，中二程度)

I think my favourite person is my father. He is a kind, responsible, hard-working, humorous and honest person. He likes helping people who are in need especially the elders and the poors. He also teaches me to help others.
He does like a teacher because he teaches me things those I do not understand, not only the school works but the way to be a good boy. When I am wrong, he doesn't punish me, but explain and teach me the correct way patiently.
He is also my playmate, there is no gap between us, we always play games after finishing my work everyday. We go out to explor new things and make new friends on weekends.
On holidays, he takes me to other countries to learn their cultures.
He is also my friend since we can share our happy and unhappy things.

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I think that the people who I love is my father. He is very kind, responsibly, hardworking, humour and honest. He likes helping people that who are in need especially the elders and the poor.
He also tells me to help others .
He (is as)/ (likes) a teacher because he teaches me the things that I do not understand, not only the school work but also the way to be a good boy. When I makes mistakes, he doesn't punish me, he will explain and patience to teach me the correct way to do.
He is my playmate, we don't have any generation gap, he plays game with me after I finish my work every day.We go out to know some new things and make new friends on weekends.
On holiday, he will take me to other country to learn their culture.
He is also my friend, we can share our happy and unhappy things.

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I think the person whom I like is my father.

He is very kind, responsible, hardworking, humourous and honest.

He likes helping people who are in need, especially the elderly and the poor.

He also tells me to help the others.

He is like a teacher to me because he teaches me the things that I do not understand, not only the school work but also the way to be a good boy.

When I make a mistake, he does not punish me, he will explain and teach me to correct patiently.

He is also my playmate.
There is not any generation gap between us.

We (will) play game after I have finished my work every day.

We go out to meet new things and new friends on weekends (every weekend).

During holiday, he will take me other country to learn foreign culture.

He is also my friend, we (will) share our happiness and sadness with each other.

The person, who I like most, is my father. He is very kind, responsible, hardworking, humourous and honest. He likes helping especially the old and poor people who are in need of help. He also tells me to help other people.

He likes to be a teacher because he teaches me the things that I do not understand. He teaches me not only the school work but also the way of being a good boy. When I make the mistake, he will not punish me. Instead, he will explain the faults to me patiently and teach me how to correct them in future.
He is my playmate, we don't have the generation gap. We will play games after I finish my work every day. We will go out to explore the new things and make the new friends on weekend.
On holidays, he will take me to other countries to learn their cultures.
He is also my friend. We can share both our happy and unhappy things.

2009-01-03 15:54:10 補充：
my homework

2009-01-03 15:55:22 補充：
happy and unhappy experiences