我要寫信,但係我驚d grammar錯得好緊要,唔該高手幫幫我,感謝!
在第三個學期中,我的gdp有3.33分, 而且我相信將來還有很大的進步空間。
我知道social science 這科是著重人與人之間的關係和溝通。
我已經有3年以上的經驗, 包括以life guard的身份在泳池工作的及以私人教練的身份教授游泳技巧,。我相信social science 這一科定能配合我的專長, 並加以發展。我有信心如果貴校能給予機會, 讓我有更深的學習, 定必把我所學到的知識回饋社會, 促進社會發展。
我想譯一譯呢d英文,好重要嫁
2009-01-03 1:15 am
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2009-01-05 9:23 pm
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In the third semester, my gdp has 3.33 points, moreover I believed that
the future will also have the very big progressive space.
I knew that social science this branch is emphatically between the
person and person's relations and the communication.
I already had 3 year above experience, including by life guard status in
swimming pool work and by personal training status professor
swimming skill. I believed that social science this branch can
coordinate my specialty surely, and develops. I have the confidence, if
your school can give the opportunity, lets me have a deeper study,
decides must the knowledge back coupling society which learns me,
the promotion social development.
希望可以幫到你啦！
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2009-01-03 2:17 am
During the third term, my gdp is 3.33 fen, and I believe that there will be very large progressive space in the future.
I know this department of social science focuses on the interpersonal relation and communicates.
Experience that I have more than 3 years, including the one that work in the swimming pool in the capacity of life guard and teaching the skill of swimming in the capacity of private coach, . I believe this department of social science will surely cooperate with my speciality, and develop . I am confident if your school can offer the chance , let me have deeper study, the knowledge that must learn me definitely feedbacks the society, bring about an advance in society.
I know this department of social science focuses on the interpersonal relation and communicates.
Experience that I have more than 3 years, including the one that work in the swimming pool in the capacity of life guard and teaching the skill of swimming in the capacity of private coach, . I believe this department of social science will surely cooperate with my speciality, and develop . I am confident if your school can offer the chance , let me have deeper study, the knowledge that must learn me definitely feedbacks the society, bring about an advance in society.
2009-01-03 1:18 am
In the third semester, my gdp has 3.33 points, moreover I believed that will have in the future also the very big progressive space.
I knew that social science this branch is emphatically between the person and person's relations and the communication.
I already had 3 year above experience, including by life guard status in swimming pool work and by personal training status professor swimming skill. I believed that social science this branch can coordinate my specialty surely, and develops. I have the confidence, if your school can give the opportunity, lets me have a deeper study, decides must the knowledge back coupling society which learns me, the promotion social development.
I knew that social science this branch is emphatically between the person and person's relations and the communication.
I already had 3 year above experience, including by life guard status in swimming pool work and by personal training status professor swimming skill. I believed that social science this branch can coordinate my specialty surely, and develops. I have the confidence, if your school can give the opportunity, lets me have a deeper study, decides must the knowledge back coupling society which learns me, the promotion social development.
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