想問老闆聽日有無得放早,英文點寫會好睇D? 謝謝 ~

Dear ...( Boss )
Tomorrow is the New Year Eve, I just want to know whether the company will grant us an early time-off in this special event? Thank you for your kind attention and advice. Happy New Year !

ABC

你好,

其實係金融海嘯下的壓力,

未來三年會有好多公司裁員,

就算係大學生都會愈黎愈難搵到野做

打工未必係一個好出路

所以我誠意邀請你睇一個機會.

我現在係一間做健康業的公司發展

我搵緊一班有共同想法,積極,認真,有野心,想生活更好的人

肯學肯做一年每個月可過萬幾二萬元的收入

如果你有興趣,我誠意邀請你登入呢個網址了解一下

www.whynotyou.hk/bill

Dear xxxx
You are kindly requested to consider and advise an approval of half day-off during 2009 New Year Eve.
Your kindness against our request is highly appreciated.
Best Regards,
yyyy