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Today I went to the oil pond with schoolmate to be the voluntary worker to move, the goal was the visitation lives alone old person and lives at cleanly. I feel am anxious, because I have not tried to talk with the stranger, moreover this's activity must help them to be clean, therefore the mood feels both intense and is afraid.
When I arrive at them the family, teacher encourages me to attempt moreover the old person very much to welcome us bravely, we then immediately to feel that with ease gets down.
After one hour clean, all goods are very neat. The old person is also very grateful we. Then he puts out a biscuit to divide Henry with us, although is not the good food, but I also feel not in part of ones duty delicacy.
In this's voluntary worker activity, I have known, originally the old person very must want our concern, the compassion. , I will participate later in many voluntary workers to move.
Then, you can participate together with me?

Today,my classmates and I go to Yau Tong because we join a programme.The programme is about visiting the aged and clean their home.
I feel very nervous because I haven't talked with strangers,and I need to clean their house,I felt very excited and scared.

When we arrive his home, my teacher tell us to try to talk with him.
He like us very much so I feel relax.

After cleaning their home for an hour, it is neat and tidy.The aged
gratitude us. He share a piece of biscuit with us.Although it is not a
delicacy, I think it is very tasty!

After the programme,I think aged need care so I'll join more
programme like this.

Would you join the programme with me?

(If it is a diary,please change this article to past tense)

2008-12-19 20:14:54 補充：
Corrections:
Line 4:felt very excited but also very scared.
Line 6:He likes us........
Line 8:gratitude us.He shares......

英:
Today I went to the oil pond with schoolmate to be the voluntary worker to move, the goal was the visitation lives alone old person and lives at cleanly. I feel am anxious, because I have not tried to talk with the stranger, moreover this's activity must help them to be clean, therefore the mood feels both intense and is afraid.
When I arrive at them the family, teacher encourages me to attempt moreover the old person very much to welcome us bravely, we then immediately to feel that with ease gets down.
After one hour clean, all goods are very neat. The old person is also very grateful we. Then he puts out a biscuit to divide Henry with us, although is not the good food, but I also feel not in part of ones duty delicacy.
In this's voluntary worker activity, I have known, originally the old person very must want our concern, the compassion. , I will participate later in many voluntary workers to move.
Then, you can participate together with me?

2008-12-19 14:17:52 補充：
樓上位網友d grammar文法就...好驚law

Today I participanted a volunteer program for visit single-living elders and cleaning their flat in Yau Tong. I was very nervious as I'd never talk to stranger and, today I have to help in cleaning works, so I felt very nervious and afraid. (其實呢句有d語病, 你可以用 I was very nervous as I'd never talk to stranger and help in cleaning works is a challendge to me.)

When I arrived the elder's home, my teacher encourage me to try and the elder showed that he is welcome about our works, this made us relax immediately.

After cleaning for 1 hour, everything were tidy and the elder was appreciated about our works. He gave me a biscuit, although it is not anything that valuable, but I could taste its eltimate delicious.

From this volunteer program, I knew that the elders really need our care and love. I will participant more volunteer jobs in the future.

So, will you join me for the volunteer program?

2008-12-19 04:55:48 補充：
我唔敢講絕對無錯, 不過樓下位網友d grammar文法就...好驚law