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Employees working in traditional offices enjoy more privacy and concentrate on their work more than those who work in open-plan offices.
Note: I've used " open-plan" as an adjective here.
Some may use" an open plan office".


http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/open-plan

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Employees working in traditional office can enjoy higher privacy and work concentration than those working in open office.