幫我睇下篇英文日記有咩錯?急急急急急急(20分喔)

Today is my school sports day.

We went to Tai Po Sport Ground by school bus. When we arrived, I found my friend Niki Kwong, Angel Chiu, Winnie Lam and Beth Ko and we had a chat.

At 10 a.m., I had a 20-metre wheelchair race. I strove to finish the race but did not win a medal. Next I had bean bag toss. I strove very much and at last won a gold medal. After the races, I played with my friend, Beth Ko.

I had fried rice and lemon tea for lunch. After lunch, I watched other races with my friends. When the sports day was over, we returned home by school bus.

Today is a happy day.

Today is my school sports day. We went to Tai Po Sports Ground by school bus. When we arrived, I found my friend Niki Kwong,Angel Chiu,Winnie Lam and Beth Ko and have a chat.

At 10a.m., I had a 20-metre wheelchair race. I strively finished the race, but I did not get a medal. Next I had throwing bean bags. I strively finished the rmatch too. After the races, I played with my friend Beth Ko.

At the lunch time, I had fried rice and lemon tea. Finally, I saw other races that were attended by my friend. After that, we went to home by school bus. Today was a happy day.

Today was my school's sports day. My schoolmates and me went toTai Po
sports ground by school bus . After we arrived, I sought for my friends, Niki Kwong, Angel Chiu,Winnie Lam and Beth Ko to have a chat.

At 10a.m, I participated in the 20 metre wheelchair race. I strifed very hardly
to finish the race, but unfortunately, I did not win. Then, I had 'throwing
bean bags'. I tried my best. And at last, I received a gold medal! After the
races, I played with my friend, Beth Ko.

At lunch time, I had fried rice and lemon tea. After that, I watched the other
races with my friends. At the end of the day, we went home, taking the
school bus . Today was an enjoyable day.

We by school bus went toTai Po sport ground.改We went to Tai Po sport ground by school bus.
ok!!

日記可以用過去式的，唔一定要用Today的