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The Hong Kong OK Convenience store service's rapidly expand, is” the advantage abundant retail sales” the remarkable management and an international famous brand success fusion good example. The OK convenience store is different with the general concession business model the convenience store. It mixed the new old economical element, the complete shop has” the advantage abundant retail sales” the capitalization to have and to manage. “benefits the abundant retail sales” to utilize the ok convenience store the international transport business type. This unified management way may rapid and the effective carrying out corporate strategy, and unifies a shop the service level.