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Hong Kong and China's OK convenience store retails the Limited company Convenience Retail Asia of by advantage abundant subordinate (the Hong Kong Stock Exchange: 8052) and the Subordinate company (is called the CRA group) to manage, opened the first OK convenience store in 1985 in Hong Kong. The CRA group altogether has approximately 260 Circle K in Hong Kong chain-like convenience store [1], Guangzhou to have 41 convenience stores, Zhuhai also has 6. The OK convenience store is the Hong Kong second big chain-like convenience store, mainly sells goods and so on food, daily necessities and magazine. Is different with its major competitor 7-11, all branch stores retail the management by Convenience Retail Asia , but does not have any special permission management, therefore branch store quantity also 7-11 are much less, but universal shop 舖 area compared to 7-11 big.