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Hello, everyone! I ‘m talking about “Comparing Hong Kong and Canada “ .Did you think about this topic? Maybe you didn’t. But, I hope you can listen patiently for my composition.
I strongly agree Canada is better than Hong Kong. First, Canadian environment is as wonderful as a dream paradise. There isn’t a lot of pollution. By comparison, Hong Kong’s pollution is awful. For example, air pollution, noisy pollution, water pollution....I think Hong Kong‘s people should control ourselves. We need to promote the people; we need to put the rubbish in the rubbish bin.... Second, I believe Canadian system of education is better than Hong Kong too. In Canada, people can study to university level. The government can support the people university ‘s taxation. But in Hong Kong, the government can support the people taxation to secondary school only. Also, I think this is the most important thing that I am extremely want to go to Canada for studying. Third, the population in Canada is larger than Hong Kong. In fact,
The density of population in Canada is not higher than Hong Kong. And the conclusion is, Hong Kong is more crowded than Canada. Also, I believe Canada is an amazing place for studying. And it is better than Hong Kong. That is because Canadian won’t playing mah-jongg.
This is the end of my presentation, Thank you.



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