中文->英文 [英文翻譯]

在這次的考試, 我感到不太滿意 .
當我看到了中文和英文兩份試卷後我感到非常之沮喪,因為兩科都不合格!
事後老師不但沒有責罵我還跟我說: 若要成功,就要下苦功
經過這次之後, 我知道要成功就一定要努力.所以我在下次的考試我必定要做好準備 .
I was not so satisfied with my performance in this exam.
After I had a look at my Chinese and English papers, I felt terribly dejected because I failed in them all!!
Not only did my teacher never blame me afterwards, but also she said, “If you want to succeed, you’ve got to work hard.”
After this experience, I realized that success requires a lot of effort. So I must prepare myself well for the next exam.
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"Not only ... but also" 通常會用「倒裝句」去表達以加強效果.
http://www.ehappystudy.com/html/5/39/100/258/2006/3/ma64341457551913600212798-0.htm
Not only does the sun give us light but also it gives us heat.
Not only did he speak English correctly， but also he speaks it fluently.
Not only is this young man clever but also he is hardworking.


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peace

I am not satisfied with the grade I got on this exam.
After I saw my Chinese and English test paper I was very depress because I failed both of my exams.
But my teacher didn't scold me; instead, she/he said to me, "If you want to get success, then you need to put some hard work."
After this experience, I understand that if I want to be successful, I need to work hard. Therefore, I need to be perpared on my next exam.