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This documentary describes a story of a growing polar bear ;from birth of a polar bear to lying on her mother's arms. The polar bear is staggering along to explore the polar world.

Unfortunately, the great catastrophe is approaching. The polar bear's home is melting by the greenhouse effect and the global warming. About fifty years, the Arctic ice will completely melt by the summer, and the small polar bear and her mother are about to be homeless ...

If people continue to damage the environment, factories continue to release carbon dioxide, it will expand the greenhouse effect, and the temperature of earth will increase as well. If we can not reflect on now, that will make more animals disappear in this world.

This is the documentary of the most profound meaning; use the animal point of view, and let us once again to face the importance of environmental protection.

2008-12-11 13:28:27 補充：
the most profoundest meaning

his documentary describes the growth of polar bear. Beginning from the birthday of a polar bear lying on her mother's arm. The polar bears face an huge change in their polar world.
Unfortunately, the great catastrophe is approaching. The polar bear's home is melting by the greenhouse effect and global warming. Might be after fifty year, the Arctic ice will completely melt down, and the small polar bear and her mother is about to homeless ...
If people continue to damage the environment , factories and cars continue to release carbon dioxide. That will continue to expand the greenhouse effect , and the temperature of earth will increase. If we don't take action now, that will go worst and more animals will disappear in this world.
This is the documentary of the most profound meaning , using the animal's point of view. Let us once again to face the importance of environmental protection.

Chinese
這部紀錄片描述北極熊的生長。 由於躺在她的母親的臂上的一只北極熊的誕生開始。 北極熊面臨在他們的極地的世界的一種巨大的變化。
令人遺憾，大的大災難正接近。 北極熊的家正透過溫室效應和全球變暖融化。 50 年追求可能，這北極冰完全熔化將，和小北極熊和她的母親正要無家可歸 ...
如果人們繼續損壞環境，工廠和汽車，繼續釋放二氧化碳。 那將繼續擴大溫室效應，並且地球的溫度將增加。 如果我們現下不採取行動， 那將進展不順利，更多的動物將在這個世界消失。
這是最深奧的意思的紀錄片，使用動物的觀點。 讓我們再一次面對環保的重要性。

This documentary describes the growth of polar bear. Beginning from the birthday of a polar bear lying on her mother's arm. The polar bears face an huge change in their polar world.
Unfortunately, the great catastrophe is approaching. The polar bear's home is melting by the greenhouse effect and global warming. Might be after fifty year, the Arctic ice will completely melt down, and the small polar bear and her mother is about to homeless ...
If people continue to damage the environment , factories and cars continue to release carbon dioxide. That will continue to expand the greenhouse effect , and the temperature of earth will increase. If we don't take action now, that will go worst and more animals will disappear in this world.
This is the documentary of the most profound meaning , using the animal's point of view. Let us once again to face the importance of environmental protection.

Chinese
這部紀錄片描述北極熊的生長。 由於躺在她的母親的臂上的一只北極熊的誕生開始。 北極熊面臨在他們的極地的世界的一種巨大的變化。
令人遺憾，大的大災難正接近。 北極熊的家正透過溫室效應和全球變暖融化。 50 年追求可能，這北極冰完全熔化將，和小北極熊和她的母親正要無家可歸 ...
如果人們繼續損壞環境，工廠和汽車，繼續釋放二氧化碳。 那將繼續擴大溫室效應，並且地球的溫度將增加。 如果我們現下不採取行動， 那將進展不順利，更多的動物將在這個世界消失。
這是最深奧的意思的紀錄片，使用動物的觀點。 讓我們再一次面對環保的重要性。

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This documentary describes the story of a polar bear growth from birth until
it lies in her mother's arms. The polar bear staggers along to explore the
world.
Unfortunately, the great catastrophe is approaching. The polar bear's home is melting with the greenhouse effect of the global warming. About fifty years
from now, the Artic ice will completely melt during the summer, and the
small polar bear and her mother are about to be homeless......
If people continue to damage the environment, factories continue to release
carbon dioxide. It will continue to expand the greenhouse effect, and the
temperature of the earth will increase.Now, if we cannot reflect on that, more
animals will disappear in this world.
This is the documentary of the most profound meaning, basing on the animal's
point of view. Let us again face the importance of environmental protection.

This documentary describes the growth of polar bear. Beginning from the birthday of a polar bear lying on her mother's arm. The polar bears face an huge change in their polar world.
Unfortunately, the great catastrophe is approaching. The polar bear's home is melting by the greenhouse effect and global warming. Might be after fifty year, the Arctic ice will completely melt down, and the small polar bear and her mother is about to homeless ...
If people continue to damage the environment , factories and cars continue to release carbon dioxide. That will continue to expand the greenhouse effect , and the temperature of earth will increase. If we don't take action now, that will go worst and more animals will disappear in this world.
This is the documentary of the most profound meaning , using the animal's point of view. Let us once again to face the importance of environmental protection.

Chinese
這部紀錄片描述北極熊的生長。 由於躺在她的母親的臂上的一只北極熊的誕生開始。 北極熊面臨在他們的極地的世界的一種巨大的變化。
令人遺憾，大的大災難正接近。 北極熊的家正透過溫室效應和全球變暖融化。 50 年追求可能，這北極冰完全熔化將，和小北極熊和她的母親正要無家可歸 ...
如果人們繼續損壞環境，工廠和汽車，繼續釋放二氧化碳。 那將繼續擴大溫室效應，並且地球的溫度將增加。 如果我們現下不採取行動， 那將進展不順利，更多的動物將在這個世界消失。
這是最深奧的意思的紀錄片，使用動物的觀點。 讓我們再一次面對環保的重要性。

(You can sand e-mail to me!)
Thank you your answer!^^

2008-12-03 13:55:29 補充：
我贊助你2分,ok?^^

This documentary describes the growth of polar bear. Beginning from the birth of a polar bear lying on her mother's arm. The polar bears face an huge change in their polar world.
Unfortunately, the great catastrophe is approaching. The polar bear's home is melting by the greenhouse effect and global warming. Might be after fifty year, the Arctic ice will completely melt down, and the small polar bear and her mother is about to homeless ...
If people continue to damage the environment , factories & cars continue to release carbon dioxide. That will continue to expand the greenhouse effect , and the temperature of earth will increase. If we don't take action now, that will go worst and more animals will disappear in this world.
This is the documentary of the most profound meaning , using the animal's point of view. Let us once again to face the importance of environmental protection.