關於英文求職的問法~~!!

"Hello(Good morning/evening)! (My name is XXXX) I saw your hiring post out there and I am interested to the job. Can I learn more about it?

if no post up:

"Hello(Good morning/evening)! Is your shop hiring people? I am interested to work in your shop"

最緊要客客氣氣
多D用"Can I..." "Would you...."........唔好下下講"I want to..."
因為英文發問句就已經有「我想......」的意思

希望幫到手.

Good morning/evening, Sir/Madam! I am XXXX. I am very interested in a job
that is described in your hunting post. Would you mind telling me more about
it?

if not:

Good morning/evening, Sir/Madam! I am XXXX. Are there any vacancies?
I am really interested in this category.

With vacancy post billed - 有招聘通告
Good morning, I saw the vacancy post outside for a store salesman, I like to apply for the post.
If no post billed -如沒有招聘通告
Excuse me Sir, I wish to know is your shop hiring any salesman? I am very interested about the job if you do.