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2008-12-02 5:02 am
"Her husband is called Charles; they met and felt in love quickly. Diana was so excited when she knew that Charles was serious towards her. She didn’t say it out but express it on her face. In my opinion, they didn’t really understand each other before marriage, so Diana was not satisfied with her current life of love. I think she decided to marry Charles too early, and agree to marry him simply because of a moment of touched sense."

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2008-12-02 6:00 pm
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"Her husband is called Charles; they met and felt in love quickly. Diana was so excited when she knew that Charles was serious about her. She didn't said it but shown on her face. In my opinion, they didn't really understand each other before their marriage, so Diana was not satisfied with her current life of love. I think she decided to marry Charles at the first place was too early, and agreed to marry him simply because of a moment of touched sense.(uncleard mind)"
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2008-12-02 9:00 am
"Her husband is called Charles; they met and fell in love quickly. Diana was so excited when she knew that Charles was serious about her. She didn't say it out but expressed it on her face. In my opinion, they didn't really understood each other before marriage, so Diana was not satisfied with her current life of love. I think she decided to marry Charles too early, and agreed to marry him simply because of a moment of touched sense."
2008-12-02 5:19 am
"Her husband is called Charles. They met and felt in love quickly. Diana was so excited when she knew that Charles was sincerely towards her. She didn’t say it out but express it on her face. In my opinion, they didn’t really understand each other before marriage, so Diana does not satisfy with her current life of love. I think she has decided to marry Charles too early, and agreed to marry him simply because of a moment of touched sense."


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