"Her husband is called Charles; they met and felt in love quickly. Diana was so excited when she knew that Charles was serious towards her. She didn’t say it out but express it on her face. In my opinion, they didn’t really understand each other before marriage, so Diana was not satisfied with her current life of love. I think she decided to marry Charles too early, and agree to marry him simply because of a moment of touched sense."
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