幫我睇下這篇文章有咩錯@十萬個唔該曬

My topic is Healthy Food.

"What is Healthy? How can we get healthy? if you eat healthy food, do you think that you will become healthy then?" When I was thinking about the above questions. I heard a news from the television. It was about a doctor giving an advice to his patient Mr. Wong not to eat too many healthy care pills of liver. Mr. Wong had sufferred from liver cancer for the past two years. Thereupon he had to take some healthy care pills for his liver. Although later on his condition had been improved, he continued taking more pills. Later the doctor found that as he had taken so many pills for his liver, it would cause complications. and his physical condition would then dropped drastically due to the excess amount of pills being taken.
After reading the above news, now many queries are in my mind. "Is it really simple and convenient for us to get healthy foods? and how useful is the specially designated traditional china medicine or western medicine for our bodies?" We all want to know the answers of the above questions. right?

Do you think ate healthy food after you will became healthy?
你其實想用咩式?
When I writing questionaire.
咩字，查字典都無。
The news talking about the doctor adviced the patient Mr. Wong don’t eat more the healthy care pill of liver.
...news is talking... 做咩要加the！！
Beacause Mr. Wong suffer from liver cancer two year beafore last.
Beacause是咪因為(如果是的話,咁你就串錯！！係Because。)
beafore是咪之前(如果是的話,咁你就串錯！！係before。)
Thereupon he ate more and more healthy care pill of liver.
你唔係想講不健康咩？？
But new, the doctor found another queation on his body.
我想你應該串錯字！！
Is it the specially designated traditional china medicine or western medicine also can save specially designed organs?
china唔記得大楷！！
All of questions we hope to know that .right?
我覺得你應該想寫，囉！！