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My name is ###. I am going to show you what talents I have in this article. I once entered a cartoon painting competition and got a bronze medal in Hong Kong and In Beijing, I got a merit in the Chinese dance grade examination . In my spare time, I voluntarily help the elderly who live in aged care centers . My best subject is Mathematics. I used to get at least 90 or above in all tests and exams in America and got high marks in Hong Kong.At school, I have been a president of a class, monitor, school prefect and even prefect leader. In sports, I am now on my school basketball and skipping teams.


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My name is ###, I will use this essay to introduce to you my personal skills. I have participated in a cartoon/ painting competition in Hong Kong and received a bronze award. I have also been awarded a merit for a Chinese dance examination in Beijing. My best subject is Mathematics, I have always received a score of 90 or above in all exams or tests in America and is still maintaining this standard in Hong Kong. I have been the president and monitor of my class, a school prefect, and also the school prefect leader. In addition, I am in the school basketball and skipping team. Outside of school, I occasionally volunteer to help the elderly.

My name is ###, i am writing this short essay to show you my potential to in different aspects. I had joined the cartoon/painting competition before and got a second runner-up in Hong Kong. Moreover, I had also got a Merit in the Chinese dancing graded examination in Beijing. Sometimes, i do voluntary work in the elderly centre. My best subject is Mathematics. I always get a 90 or above in all examinations or tests in American and got a satisfiying results in Hong Kong too. I have been a president of a class, monitor, a school prefect and a prefect leader in school. I am also a member of basketball and skipping team.