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Mrs Chan has a daughter.She is a (help girlX) GOOD HELPER.She always helps her mother.Mr Lee always throws (aX) litter out of (hisX) THE window.I don't like (himX) WHAT HE DOES.Miss Chan plays music TOO loud every (nightX) EVENING.Mr Au sometimes helps my grandma to (be carryX) TAKE heavy things.There are (haveX) too many (roadworksX) CONSTRUCTION in my neighbourhood(.There are)BUT HAVE not enough (pavementX)SIDEWALKS.(It is dangerous for theX) Pedestrians ARE TOO DANEROURS to walk in the street.(Therehore soX) THEREFORE, the government should build more footbridgeS.What (do you thinkX) is the worse problem in your (streetX) NEIGHBOURHOOD? Please write IT DOWN now.

Mrs Chan has a daughter.She is a help girl.She
always helps her mother.Mr Lee always throws (x)a litter out
of his window.I don't like him.Miss Chan plays music loud
every night.Mr Au sometimes helps my grandma to (x)be carry
heavy things.There are (x)have too many roadworks in my
neighbourhood.There are not enough pavement.It is dangerous
for the pedestrians to walk in the street.Therehore so the
government should build more footbridge.What do you
think is the worse problem in your street?Please write
now.
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應該是full stop 一行吧?

2008-11-18 18:12:14 補充：
footbridge加s得不得架??

Hi,
Mrs Chan has a daughter.She is a HELPFUL girl.She
always helps her mother.Mr Lee always throws ( ) litter out
of his window.I don't like him.Miss Chan plays THE music loud
every night.Mr Au sometimes helps my grandma ( ) carry
heavy things.There are ( ) too many roadworks in my
neighbourhood.There are not enough pavementS.It is dangerous
for the pedestrians to walk in the street THEREFORE the
government should build more footbridgeS.What do you
think is the worsT problem in your street?Please write
now.
:)
Bye

Mrs Chan has a daughter.She is a ____ girl.She
always helps her mother.Mr Lee always throws (aX) litter out
of (hisX) window.I don't like him.Miss Chan plays music loud
every night.Mr Au sometimes helps my grandma to (beX) carry
heavy things.There are (haveX) too many roadworks in my
neighbourhood.There are not enough pavement.It is dangerous
for (theX) pedestrians to walk in the street.Therehore so the
government should build more _______.What do you
think is the ________ problem in your street?Please write
now.