(我的gramma不太好 常常不知道自己錯什麼 煩請各高手指導!!)
Dear Editor,
Re: The importance of celebrities to be good role models
In responding to the frequent news of celebrities acting inappropriately, I am writing to share my thought on the importance for celebrities to be good role models. There are three main reasons to support this idea.
Nowadays, celebrities have a major influence on our society. They can easily affect the way people think and behave ,for better or worse. Take the “skinny fever” as an example.Most celebrities are keeping themselves really skinny due to their career needs. However,this is contributing to the upsurge in being very thin among many people.The celebrities in the tabloids affect the self image of many young girls and women.
More and more people think that being very thin is beautiful and fashionable, and thus tries to lose pounds through extreme diets. However, more and more people are suffered from the eating disorders due to the extreme diets.It indicates that the influences of celebrities is powerful.
Moreover, celebrities are extremely influential among youngsters. In many youngsters’ mind, celebrities mean cool, fashion and success. When these celebrities change the way they behave, youngsters always follow suit. In most cases, specially among younger teenagers, they always follow these celebrities’ behavior blindly without judging. If these celebrities behave inappropriately, just like extreme dieting
,smoking or dealing drugs, the young followers would be greatly affected and may be suffered from the inappropriate act.
Finally, celebrities are representing the place they are come from.(怪怪的) Foreigners always understand a place by knowing the celebrities from that place,and therefore it is a responsibility of the celebrities to be a good role model and give a good impression to them.
To conclude, celebrities are highly influential and they can easily change the way people think and behave.That’s why it is important for celebrities to be good role models. Yours faithfully Pat Lee
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