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My name is Ken . I am a Macanese . I have a father , mother , brother and a
lot of relatives .
( 我叫ken,是一位澳門人。我有一個爸爸,一個媽媽,一個哥哥和
一班親戚。)
When I was just a little boy , my relatives and me lived in the same village .
They always played with me and took photo with me , we were happy .
( 小時候,他們居住在鄉村中,經常和我玩,和我拍照。很開心,很
快樂地一年又一年地過。)
On May of two thousanda and four , my grandmother passed away .
My relativse were very sad . For a long time , they felt not sorrowfuler than
before .
( 二OO四年五月,我的祖母因病去世,大家都很傷心。隨著時間過
去,親戚們慢慢地接受了祖母去世的事實。)
On Jane of two thousanda and six , I was graduation in my primary school .
On July , I studied at Kwong Tai Middle School Macau .First , I felt strange
but teachers used their ways to make me and my classmates ` s relation became
good . They also made me join some activities are no in primary school .
( 二OO六年六月,我小學畢業了,結束了6年的小學習階段。同年7
月,我第一天就讀廣大中學,起初比較陌生,不過,在短短的一個
月裡,老師用他們的方法令我們從此認識對方並友好起來,還接觸
到不過在小學沒有的活動。)
2008-11-08 13:43:29 補充:
如果你是在廣大中學就讀 , 你就應該寫Kwong Tai Middle School ;
如果你是在廣大中學(澳門)就讀 , 你就應該寫Kwong Tai Middle School Macau ,
切住!切住!
2008-11-08 13:46:30 補充:
Sorry
把切記寫了切住
2008-11-08 15:43:20 補充:
請把第二段的my relatives and me lived in the same village 改成:
my relatives and I lived in the same village