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I ever(DELETE) met a girl,who(DELETE) She is very beautiful.i I seemed to fall in love with her at first sight .
But i I understood her true more as soon as i I knew her for a longer time.i I found her not only silly and but also stupid.
Her academic result is worst bad since she never hard-workink worked hard in her study and is very stupid
mainly.More important,she always didn't understantd what mean when other's feelings even though someone
people advised to her that people are angry with her very often.

Before long I met a girl,who . She is not beautiful.At first,I had nothing feeling to her.But when i knew her for a longer time that i , I found she is her a very clever girl.She always got an excellent result in school.Because She is so hard-working in her studyies and is
very clever mainly.By the way,she is always is nice to all people and does
voluntary work often.She uauslly likes to help people even though it he is a stranger guy.So I really like her very much.She is so such a great girl that we become close
friends finally.

To sum up,I think both beatiful and clever is are different things.So what do you prefer? clever must
important than or beatiful. ?