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2008-11-02 8:25 am

Dear Editor:

I ever met a girl,who is very beautiful.i seemed to fall in love at first sight .
But i understood her true as soon as i knew her longer time.i found her not only silly and also stupid.
Her result is worst since she never hard-workink in study and very stupid
mainly.More important,she always didn't understant what mean when other
people advised to her that people are angry with her very often.

Before long I met a girl,who is not beautiful.At first,I had nothing feel to her.But i knew her for long time that i found she is very cleve girl.She always got a excellent result in school.Because She is so hard-working in study and
very clever mainly.By the way,she always is nice to all people and do
voluntary work often.She uauslly like to help people even though it is strange guy.So I really like her very much.She is so great girl that we become close
friends finaly.

To sum up,I think both beatiful and clever is different things.So clever must
important than beatiful.

Chris Wong
盡量保留原有意思thx

回答 (1)

joe

2008-11-11 5:36 pm

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I ever(DELETE) met a girl,who(DELETE) She is very beautiful.i I seemed to fall in love with her at first sight .
But i I understood her true more as soon as i I knew her for a longer time.i I found her not only silly and but also stupid.
Her academic result is worst bad since she never hard-workink worked hard in her study and is very stupid
mainly.More important,she always didn't understantd what mean when other's feelings even though someone
people advised to her that people are angry with her very often.

Before long I met a girl,who . She is not beautiful.At first,I had nothing feeling to her.But when i knew her for a longer time that i , I found she is her a very clever girl.She always got an excellent result in school.Because She is so hard-working in her studyies and is
very clever mainly.By the way,she is always is nice to all people and does
voluntary work often.She uauslly likes to help people even though it he is a stranger guy.So I really like her very much.She is so such a great girl that we become close
friends finally.

To sum up,I think both beatiful and clever is are different things.So what do you prefer? clever must
important than or beatiful. ?

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