麻煩幫幫手,十萬個唔該!

中文文法改為英文文法, 有些英文字選用錯了。
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1} People like to BBQ when a season is Winter .
2} People like to camping when a time of year is Spring.
3} I have many birthday parties with friends when a month is July .
4} I have "candle light dinner" with lover when a day is Valentine's Day.
5} My family are eating out when the day is Mother's Day .
6} I like to have parties with friends when a day is birthday .
7} I have "candle light dinner" at home when a time is A wedding anniversary .
8} Tourist likes to see night scenes where a city is Hong Kong .
9} Disneyworld is a place where many children like to go there.
10}India is a country where is very hot all the year round.
11} I like play football with friends when Sunday is my holiday.
12} My friend celebrate my 22th years birthday when my birthday is 20 july 2008.
13} Japan is my favorite trip place where i like buy somethings.
14}Shi o is a beach where is my best choose playground.
15} Peter is my mathematics teacher whom my classmate very enjoy to learn at his teaching time.
16} Football is my favorite sport which i play football with friends everyweek.
17} Cecilia Cheung is my favorite pop singer whom i listen her CD's everyday.
18} I prepare to do my job when I wake up at seven o'clock.

你點解要寫到重複, 好似(1), winter is a season, 係人都知啦!!!
(1) People like BBQ in Winter.
(2) People like camping in Spring.
(3) I have many birthday parties to attend in July.
(4) I do have candle light dinner with my lover in Valentine's Day.
(5) My family will have a dinner outside when Mother's Day.
(6) When my birthday, I will celebrate with my friend.
(7) I will have candle light dinner at home when my wedding anniversary.
(8) The tourist like to visit Hong Kong because they enjoy Hong Kong night scenes.
(9) The children like going to Disneyworld because there have many games to play.
(10) The weather in India is very hot all the time.
(11) Sunday is my holiday, I like playing football with my friend.
(12) I will be 22 years old on 20 July, my friend will celebrate with me on that day.
(13) Japan is my favaorite country because I like shopping in there.
(14) If we go to swim, I will choose the Shi O beach in my first choice.
(15) Peter is my Maths teacher, Our classmates enjoy to attend his class.
(16) My favorite sport is football, I play it with my friend everyweek.
(17) My favorite pop singer is Cecilia Cheung, I listen her CD everyday.
(18) Every working day, I will be wake up at 7.

Many of your sentences are quite awkward. I changed some of them and tried to keep your original meaning. Take a look


2}Spring is the time of a year when people like to go camping.

4}Valentine's Day is a day when i have "candle light dinner" with my lover.

6}A birthday is a day when i like to have parties with friends.<------you have more than one party in that day? if not, change it to

A birthday is a day when i like to party with friends

7}A wedding anniversary is a day when i have "candle light dinner" with my wife at home

8}Many toursits found Hong Kong's night scenery attractive

9}DisneyLAND is a place where many children like to go.

10}India is a country with hot weather all year round.

11}Sunday is a holiday when i like to play football with friends.

12}My friend and I celebrate my birthday on 20th July 2008

13)Japan is my favorite place to travel and shop.

14}Shi o is a beach where i choose my playground in first.<-----do not understand what u mean

15}Peter is a good teacher who teaches us mathematics


16}Football is my favorite sport, and i play football with friends everyweek.


17}Cecilia Cheung is my favorite pop singer, and I listen to her CDs everyday.

18}I wake up at seven to go to work.

2008-10-31 17:45:10 補充：
The words in the sentences exceeds the 補充 limit, so I am starting a new thread.