我呢篇文章有冇錯,,如要加長,,咁加d咩???
更新1:
要關於My dream job既野
有關一份英文功課,,唔知點算.....
2008-10-30 3:32 pm
This is me. My name is Amanda. I want to be an actress when I grow up. If I become an actress, I will act many comedy plays or films for viewer. I want to be an actress because I like acting very much. I will work in a theatre. I need to work hard and to be outgoing so that my dream job will come true. I need to be industrious too. I hope I can become an excellent and famous actress.
我呢篇文章有冇錯,,如要加長,,咁加d咩???
我呢篇文章有冇錯,,如要加長,,咁加d咩???
回答 (2)
2008-10-30 5:21 pm
✔ 最佳答案
我覺得你的這篇文章有很多問題,所以如果你可以的說你可以打中文比我然後我幫你做...my e-mail:[email protected]
你要廣你這篇文章要寫幾多字?
主題係唔係My dream job?
咩學歷?(今年中幾?)
你比時做homework係點好好/不太好/ok啦/不好/很不好?
但係我覺得你英方面都ok,+油就會好好多...
2008-10-31 07:34:39 補充：
如果你e家個文章的中文係:
我夢想的工作
這是我。我的名字是阿曼達。我想成為一個演員時，我長大了。如果我成為一個演員，我會採取行動起著許多喜劇或電影觀眾。我想成為一個演員，因為我喜歡非常行事。我將在一個工作區內。我必須努力工作，將離任，使我夢想的工作將成為現實。我需要勤奮了。我希望我能成為一個出色和著名演員。
2008-10-30 9:20 pm
This is me, Amanda. An actress, is my favourit job, when I grow up. If I become an actress, I will act of many comedy plays or films, working in a theatre. I want to be an actress because I like acting very much.
If my dream job come true, I need to be outgoing and hard working .
I hope that I can become an excellent and famous actress ( superstar).
If my dream job come true, I need to be outgoing and hard working .
I hope that I can become an excellent and famous actress ( superstar).
參考: 個人化
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