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2008-10-27 8:59 pm
可否幫我睇睇英文寫得岩嗎, grammar有無錯?? Thanks!


公司近年積極注入新產品以及開拓新市場。公司多年來本著「不斷求變、以客為尊」的精神去經營,又明白到購物就是一種享受,故對店鋪環境及服務的要求都十分高,務求令顧客每次購物時都能有愉快經歷。

We recognize the need to explore new market and new creation. Customer satisfaction is our mission and they will continually strive for improvement, we are very strict with shop decoration and services as we understand that a comfortable shopping environment and a satisfying shopping experience are very important to customers nowadays.


公司一直積極參與不同類型的慈善活動,近年更將環保概念推廣至辦公室及店鋪,並組織一隊十多人的環保義工,定期舉行會議報告內部進展,希望透過內部宣傳及教育來提升員工的環保意識,致力減少日常運作對環境所產生的不良影響,履行企業社會責任。

Company has taken part in a number of fund raising activities and donations. We also actively promote environmental awareness amongst staffs and the shops. Besides, staff volunteering workshops was organized and a series of training sessions will be conducted. We wish to raise the widest possible environmental awareness to staffs through the internal promotion and education. To implement corporate social responsibility, we continue to take actions to minimize the negative impacts of their business.


公司以「資源善用」為原則,由紙張、食水至電量等能源都都實施減少浪費及循環再用,推行至今的成功有賴一眾員工的熱心參與。最近,更選用了節能燈,因為該款節能燈不但光效媲美白熾燈,同時又可節省80%電力,簡單而有效地舒緩全球氣氛轉變。

營造店鋪舒適的購物環境給顧客十分重要,直到現時已有30家新店採用此節能燈。

With the principle of sustainable use of resources, we reduce and recycle the resources like paper, water and electricity. Recently, we selected saving lamps because of a 20W energy saving lamp produces similar amount of light to a 100W incandescent bulb but consumes 80% less energy as well as ease Global Warming.

It is important to build a nice shopping environment to consumers, there are 30 new shops have been adopted the energy saving lamps up to now.

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2008-10-27 9:04 pm
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We recognize the need to explore new market and new creation. Customer satisfaction is our mission and they will continually strive for improvement, we are very strict with shop decoration and services as we understand that a comfortable shopping environment and a satisfying shopping experience are very important to customers nowadays.

Company has taken part in a number of fund raising activities and donations. We also actively promote environmental awareness amongst staffs and the shops. Besides, staff volunteering workshops was organized and a series of training sessions will be conducted. We wish to raise the widest possible environmental awareness to staffs through the internal promotion and education. To implement corporate social responsibility, we continue to take actions to minimize the negative impacts of their business.

With the principle of sustainable use of resources, we reduce and recycle the resources like paper, water and electricity. Recently, we selected saving lamps because of a 20W energy saving lamp produces similar amount of light to a 100W incandescent bulb but consumes 80% less energy as well as ease Global Warming.

It is important to build a nice shopping environment to consumers, there are 30 new shops have been adopted the energy saving lamps up to now
2008-10-30 6:29 am
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good !!!
參考: me
2008-10-28 6:47 am
The company pours into the new products and opens up the new market actively in recent years. Company for many years in line with ' changes persuings constant, customer focus ' spirit go manage, it is a kind of enjoyment to be so clear that do shopping again, so expecting all very much to environment of the shop and service, must make customer can have happy experience when the each shopping.

The company has been participating in different kinds of charitable activities actively all the time, has popularized the environmental protection concept to go to office and shop in recent years, organize one team ten more than environmental protection voluntary labour of people, hold meeting develop inside the report regularly, hope to propagate and educate the environmental consciousness that improve the staff through the inside, devoted to reducing daily operation to the harmful effects that the environment produce, fulfil enterprise's community responsibility.

The company does not use from paper, drinking water until energy all reduce waste and circulation to electric consumption on the principle that ' resources are made the best of ', pursue the enthusiastic participation that success so far depended on a all staff. Recently, select electricity-saving lamp, the electricity-saving lamp for use even more not only smooth result a match for incandescent lamp, while can save 80% of the electricity, releive the global atmosphere to change simply and effectively.

Build shop comfortable shopping environment give customer to be very important, until the fact that now has 30 new shops have adopted this electricity-saving lamp.
參考: dr.eye
2008-10-27 11:03 pm
Our company has put the focus on putting up new products as well as widening our marketing targets in recent years. Our company always takes the people-oriented approach. We understand shopping is a kind of enjoyment, and this is the reason why we have high expectations in the shops and services provided, in order to please our customers everytime.

Our company always takes part in fund raising activities and cooperates with other charities. We also emphasizes in promoting environmental awareness amongst staffs and our shops. We hope to improve this by holding regular meetings and training sessions. This will certainly minimize the pollution made by our company.

With the principle of sustainable use of resources, we reduce and recycle the resources like paper, water and electricity. Recently, we selected saving lamps because of a 20W energy saving lamp produces similar amount of light to a 100W incandescent bulb but consumes 80% less energy as well as ease Global Warming.

It is important to build a nice shopping environment to consumers, so far there are 30 new shops have been adopted the energy saving lamps.
參考: Myself


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