About Gramma...

The sun raise up at the East.
The sun was raising up at the East.

sorry呀,唔好意思, raise 係舉起,提高, 個sun好難自已舉起自已,East 少用at,多用in

應該係
The sun rises in the east.
The sun was rising in the east. east用細草e比較好,因為大草East一般指東方(地區),唔係方向

1,My mum told me she participated in a trip, my whole family needed to go, of course including me.

including係present participle 表示一個active action主動性的動作
即係the family includes you包括在內

included係past participle 表示一個passive action被動性的動作
即係my whole family needed to go, of course I am included.我被包括在內

2,The wind made the windmills move.
如上一樣, d風(直接)令到個風車郁

The wind made the windmills moved.
個風車比d風郁左,不過好少咁用,但唔係錯