(急) 日文問題, 麻煩懂日文的朋友們幫幫手, 謝謝!!

こんにちは、

（your name）と申します。
予約したいんですが、１１月４日から一泊、空いている部屋がありませんか？人数は2名です。素泊りお願いします。
もし空いている部屋があったら、料金はいくらか、現金で払うかどうか、教えてください。

ところで、そちらは門禁がありませんか。

折り返しご返事をいただきますよう、お願い申し上げます。

（your name）より


2008-10-23 09:25:22 補充：
關於你個人的一些問題
房租收現金是一定的了，至於收不收信用咭，則視乎那間旅館有沒有。通常比較大的都會有，所以我估計你那間可能沒有。

門禁方面，有的話通常網頁會寫，如果沒寫的話就應該沒有。假若你真的要晚點回去，應該出門前跟旅館的職員交待一下。

Someone has already translated your text into Japanese so your problem probably be solved.

For information, there is free site for translation: http://babelfish.yahoo.com/

Type in the English text and choose English and Japanese, press translate and you will get the Japanese version, thought not 100% but can help. I use the software to translate my words, print the Japanese version and show it to the hotel reception.

In addition, you can use it to read site in Japanese only.

1. most web-sites of Japanese hotels have English version, no need to
communicate with Japanese (I do not understand Japanese as well)
(every time I made reservation with English, no problem at all)
2. you may highlight that dinner is not required during reservation
3 valid visa card details are required as registration during reservation of
room (s)
4 availability of room vacancy and room rate should be made direct
to individual hotel during reservation
5 what is the meaning of (門禁) ?