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Are you an only child in your family? In my case, I'm not an only child and I have found both the advantages and disadvantages of being an only child from a personal level.

Firstly, for those parents who are very engaged in their work, if they have more than two children, accidents might occur, injuring the children. When they are concentrating on their work, they tend to lack awareness. Furthermore, some parents and their children may develop a generation gap. Both parties cannot understand each other, and the child might feel lonely. That is what I am grateful to have siblings whom I can talk to and play with.

However, being an only child also has many benefits. For example, parents will pay full attention to their children and avoid any partiality between them. Besides, festivals come, parents will spend saved money on buying presents. One less child also decreases the financial burdens by more than a half! Moreover, children will feel free because there will be no one meddling in their affairs or sharing their belongings.

Apart from that, some people may think that their brother or sister will be a nuisance and trouble them, but I think our brothers and sisters care about us. Also, some people may think that they are free when they are an only child, but I think that it completely the opposite for me. I will feel lonely because there will be no one to keep me company, no one to play with, shop with and work with. There will be no one to relieve my pressure and weights on my mind.

To sum up the advantages and disadvantages of being an only child, whether you are or not, there are always two sides to the issues, so I believe that you should be optimistic and live your life with happiness and gratefulness.

I think you need to do more work on your use of English and grammar as there are quite a number of mistakes in these aspects. Due to the word limit in the answer I have only included my suggestions. I am happy to email you my findings of your mistakes though (if you like).

Are you the only child in your family? I am not, and I think there are pros and cons either way. (pros - advantages; cons - disadvantages)

(about being the only child) Being the only child gets full attention from the parents, which means that accidents are less likely to occur. You also have the privacy and do not have to worry about fightings and sharings. Parents can save by only having to buy presents to their only child in any special occasion. However, at times you do feel lonely as you have no one to talk to.

(about having a sibling) Some might think that it's a nuisance to have a sibling, but I don't see it this way. Having brothers or sisters means that you always support and look out for each other. They are like your best friends, and if anything happens, you always know that you have someone to turn to. You also won't feel lonely and can learn about the beauty of 'sharing'.

Overall there are benefits either being the only child or having a sibling. However you should always stay optimistic and be grateful about your life.

some parents 可以用many parents..
lacking awareness 應該系lack of awareness..
Besides these, when the festival comes, parents will save their money to spend on buying presents, it will decrease their burden.呢句應該要加reasons點解parents會減輕佢地既負擔‧
freedom系名詞,用free
做咩用thought ,用think牙><
an intense people用得an就姐系話得一個,咁你又打people....
there still have a benefits用'a'就姐系單數,姐系benefit囉...