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N.Y CHAN

2008-10-18 10:09 pm

Summary:
The government has issued that the old age allowance will be risen to HK$1000 to help
the old ages. The idea cause a huge controversy although it will benefit a lot of needies.
Since the needies, who are authorized to received the allowance ,must pass through different
limitations of income and assets and the critics see this as a means test treatment.
The government explain that if the OAA (Old age allowance) rates increased to HK $ 1000 a
month, it will spend a lot of money, assuming more people received the allowance.

Comments:
The increasing allowance can make needies' live much better, on the other hand,
the problem of cheating the allowance also should be looked squarely, that's why the
government set the test to recongize whether people are in need.Therefore, the government
has made enough response to the public. The critics, political parties and others ,who oppose
the idea, are making too strict requirement to the government.

回答 (1)

Train

2008-10-18 11:57 pm

✔ 最佳答案

I corrected the grammatical errors and kept your original meaning unchanged.

Summary:
The government has issued that the old age allowance will be risen to HK$1000 to help the old ages. The idea causes a huge controversy although it will benefit a lot of needy old people. Since the needy old people, who are authorized to receive the allowance, must pass through different examinations of income and assets, the critics see this as a mean to test treatment. The government explained that if the OAA (Old age allowance) rate was increased to HK$1000 a month, it will spend a lot of money because more people will receive the allowance.

Comments:
The increasing allowance can make needy old people live much better. On the other hand, the problem of cheating the allowance should be looked squarely. That is why the government set the test to recognize which people are in need. After all, the government has made enough responses to the public. The critics, political parties and others, who oppose to the idea, are making too strict requirement to the government.

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