grammar question~~~~

2008-10-17 7:22 am
Before the presentation day, we discussed what style we should dress in on
that day


before the presentation, we discussed how we should be dressed to give our presentation


2句意思有冇唔同..grammar岩唔岩

回答 (3)

2008-10-17 9:57 am
✔ 最佳答案

These 2 sentences are different in meaning :

before the presentation day / before the presentation – sentence 1 clearly stated that it was a presentation day, while sentence 2 only say presentation. In sentence 1 we know very well that the verb (discuss) happened before the presentation day. While for sentence 2, it can mean only one hour before the presentation.

Sentence 2 told us that you will dress up for giving your presentation. Sentence 1 does not have this content at all.

For grammar :

Sentence 1 :
we should use which style, not what style, because which is used as the object of a verb (discuss) to show what thing you are referring to.
The latter part of the sentence should use inversion, and we should use dress up. So sentence 1 should be changed to :

1. Before the day of presentation, we discussed on which style should we dress up on that day.

Sentence 2 :
How we should dress (up) is acceptable, but we cannot say “be dressed” because this is a passive voice, while the fact is that you are dressing up by yourself, not by other people. So sentence 2 should be changed to :

2. Before the day of presentation, we discussed how we should dress to make our presentation.
參考: Myself
2008-10-25 4:26 am
What about saying this:

"The day before presentation we discussed how to dress up."

It seems we don't have to emphasize "on that day" if they mean the "presentation day" only.

2008-10-25 09:03:01 補充:
if the meaning is not one day before, however, i suggest changing "The day before presentation" to:

Shortly before / Two days before / A few days before / A week before, etc.
2008-10-17 8:39 am
I would like to say this way:

We discussed the dressing style for the coming presentation.


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